Poetry: Untitled #5 and #6
Mar. 7th, 2007 09:47 amClean laundry folded,
Toilet, sink and shower scrubbed,
These measures composed --
just_tanka where, in response to a comment available here, I also posted the following slice of bathos:
"Between my hands, warmed
By the coffee mug, rise wisps
Of steam: heat's pale ghosts.
Toilet, sink and shower scrubbed,
These measures composed --
And still the snow is falling.[Crossposted to
And still the snow is falling.
"Between my hands, warmed
By the coffee mug, rise wisps
Of steam: heat's pale ghosts.
Without doubt, the time has comeCue the rimshot.]
To get the thermostat fixed."