Oh wow. I don't know the first thing about attempting to write a sonnet, so I can't comment technically, but major points for making it pretty, making it flow well, and, you know, for even attempting it, because it's something different and interesting. I approve!
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Date: 2009-09-22 12:17 am (UTC)