Wow. I read this as the prelude to a fic (you know how some authors put relevant poems at the beginning?), and I couldn't believe it when I realized the poem *was* the fic. I mean that as a compliment - the poem seemed very true to the Shakespearian mold, especially in the language and 'pace' of the line. I especially liked the 'turn', both literal (Ursa looking back at her former home) and poetic. Very lovely. <3
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branchandroot
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Date: 2009-09-21 10:40 pm (UTC)