Fanfiction: Another Chibi Drabble (Fullmetal Alchemist)

[nebroadwe]

Title: Jove's Laughter
Fandom: FMA (anime or manga version)
Character(s): Ed and Al
Pairing(s): None explicit.
Word Count: 100 (bringing the sequence total to 2900)
Warnings: None.
A/N: Another 100 words in my Chibi Drabbles sequence, about Ed, Al and Winry's childhood. Concrit welcomed with a tip on Wits in the Wild-Goose Chase. :-) Crossposted from nebroadwe to Höllenbeck (i.e. hagaren_manga, fm_alchemist, fma_gen, fma_writers and fma_fiction).

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You cheater! I'm gonna tell her you cheat!

Comments

[ishte.livejournal.com]

This was wonderful. hahaha. Ed is just so oblivious about things like this. Al has to explain everything. I think when Ed and Winry are married, that whenever they have a fight, Al is going to have to explain to Ed what he did wrong before Ed will know what to apologize for. *snicker*

(Edit: Sorry, that was me I was in my test account and forgot!)

[nebroadwe.livejournal.com]

This was wonderful. hahaha. Ed is just so oblivious about things like this. Al has to explain everything. I think when Ed and Winry are married, that whenever they have a fight, Al is going to have to explain to Ed what he did wrong before Ed will know what to apologize for. *snicker*

Funny you should mention that ... I have a spousal EdWin in draft in which those two are experiencing communication problems, but unfortunately Al isn't around to straighten his brother out ...

(Edit: Sorry, that was me I was in my test account and forgot!)

Darn. For a minute there I thought I had a new reader. I'm such an audience hound. :-)

[malka2009.livejournal.com]

Funny you should mention that ... I have a spousal EdWin in draft in which those two are experiencing communication problems, but unfortunately Al isn't around to straighten his brother out ...

*perks up* I'll be looking forward to that! I love EdWin with a dash of Al on the side; he brings a touch of sanity to the dynamic. Heaven knows that a down-to-earth gentleman like Al needs to kibitz his hopeless brother.

[nebroadwe.livejournal.com]

light_rises was the person who really brought it home to me that EdWin needs to take account of Al (that really helped when I wrote "Light the Traveler Home" (http://nebroadwe.livejournal.com/18696.html) a couple of years back. And Al generally needs more love from this fandom -- or at least he thinks so: he popped up last week with an idea for a post-manga 'fic that I'm going to try to finish up before the end of the month.