Gorgeous. You showed the way their love developed so well, and made them both believable. Your poetry's beautiful! The style is so classic and romantic, and your rhymes flow smoothly enough that I didn't even realize you rhymed until I went back and reread. Great job!
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Date: 2008-08-10 07:31 am (UTC)